An Alien Map

by Rachel Brown


It was on the date 66. 6666 that scientists discovered that aliens had invaded Mars.

There were three men on Mars at this time, Dr. Griffin who is an African American who has black hair, dark skin and brown eyes, Dr. Leo who is a Japanese who has black hair, tan skin and green eyes and Dr. Winglo who is a Canadian Islander who has red hair, white skin and hazel eyes.

" Hey look over here, I think I found something " said Dr. Griffin,

" What is it " said Dr. Leo,

"It looks like a mixture of mold and some glowing soap like chemicals" said Dr. Winglo " lets examine it some more ".

At that very moment they were attacked by a quaffle (which is a dog like animal with no hair) and when they woke up they were in a cave like crater,

" where am I, ooh... ouch... ah, guys are you there? " said Dr. Leo, and when Dr. Griffin replied he sounded like he was in great pain,

" yeah I'm here. I don't know about Dr. Winglo though " said Dr. Griffin and at that moment a bad alien came who had green glowing goop for his body and hair everywhere, took Dr. Winglo into the crater an he was all tied up and threw him in the crater with Dr. Leo and Dr. Griffin. Dr. Winglo was bruised and badly cut all over his body. The second the alien left Dr. Leo said,

" Dr. Winglo, are you OK?"

Struggling to speak Dr. Winglo replied, " badly cut, badly bruised but I think I'm going to live".

The bad alien returned and after speaking a different language he took them somewhere else.

And after Dr. Griffin, Dr. Winglo and Dr. Leo got out of the ropes that the bad aliens tied them up with, they went to spy on the aliens. The aliens were in the middle of a conversation when all three scenists got out of the room that the aliens were keeping them in and they all ran until they fell into a crater. Lucky for them this was an under ground safety room all the good aliens stayed in so that the bad aliens couldn't find them.

They were all scared until a blue alien came over to them and said to them "It is okay. You are safe with us." Then Dr. Winglo said, "If you are an alien, why do you speak our language?". When the good alien replied, he explained the whole thing. "Good aliens are blue and talk normal, bad aliens are green, have hair all over their body and speak a different language. So, whatever you do, if you see a green alien, run away!". Just then, a blue alien's head came down the hole and landed on the ground. A green alien got him. Dr. Winglo said, "Well I understand now. . ." After eating and resting, Dr. Leo asked the alien "What is your name?". The alien replied "Gasképall. My name is Gasképall. And we need to leave here NOW!". Dr. Griffin asked why, but the alien just said "Follow me!", and so they did.

They kept following him until they got to a giant cave that all the bad aliens were inside of. They got as close to the bad aliens as they could without being seen. They got close enough to hear that they had a map. Gasképall knew how to speak the bad aliens language so he could understand what they were saying and was translating it. But the map they had was no ordinary map. This was a spacial map that only the chosen one could open. Just then Dr. Winglo almost blew their cover when he asked "who is the chosen one?" and Dr. Leo, Dr. Griffin and Gasképall all replied "SHHHHHHHHH" but the bad aliens didn't suspect a thing. The aliens continued talking about a legend. A legend that the crater aliens hid gold on he planet mars, but not in Noyla in Bloobor which is a city of bad aliens in the core of the planet. And how maybe that's where the map lead them to, but they couldn't find out until they found the chosen one. Before the aliens left they hid the map so no one could find it, but since they were watching the whole time they knew where it was hidden. So when the bad aliens left Dr. Griffin, Dr. Leo, Dr. Winglo and Gasképall all snuck into the cave and stole the map. After they got the map they went back to the under ground safety room and tried to open it. After the three scenists all tried to open it they gave it to Gasképall and he got it opened. The bad aliens were right, the map did lead them to Bloobor. After some time of thinking it over they decided to follow the map before the bad aliens noticed it was gone. They set out on the long journey to the center of the planet mars. They did get there that day but they had to stop their jurney so that they could rest.

They did get there but they had to stop so that they could rest. After they rested they had to sneak around because all the bad aliens all over the place, and if any of the bad aliens saw them they would have to be beheaded. So after sneaking around for about three hours they found a cave and hid in it.

They were discussing where they were headed next, how they would get there and how to find the treasure without being seen when a good quaffle (which remember is like a dog) started licking Dr. Winglo. Of course Dr. Winglo loved it and said ; "Aawwwe ... look at the little guy we just have to keep him" and of course Dr. Leo, Dr. Griffin and Gasképall all agreed to keep him. "But we can't leave without giving him a name" says Dr. Winglo and they all agreed on the name "Oscar". They had to sleep in the cave but Oscar was up all night keeping them safe.

The next day they were going to set out on the long and unsafe journey into town. They all woke up the next day and set off on the long journey, getting into town was hard to do without being seen but they managed to get to the heart of the city, that's where they thought the treasure was buried. There was nobody in town because it was the week of rest (much like March Break) and so it wasn't as hard as they thought it was going to be, or so they thought. They hunted and hunted trying to find treasure but they didn't find any. Then a group of bad aliens came up to them and speaking their own language ( Gasképall understands) they got really mad at the good aliens and pushed them in the hole they were digging. They fell far since the hole was very deep, when they hit the bottom they hit a big piece of metal and thought that it was gold. While the scientists were testing whether the metal was gold, Gasképall and Oscar were following the map and looking for treasure. They were all getting tired when Oscar found something and dug it up, it was shiny and it was big but they were stuck in the hole and could not get out. So they decided not to wait and try and open it while they were in the hole. Once they got it opened they saw what it was and it wasn't what they thought it was going to be! It was a big trunk with clothes, pictures and letters. They didn't bother reading them because if they didn't find the treasure soon the bad aliens would come and try to kill them because they stole the map.

Finally they got out of the hole and went back to the cave they stayed at before and talked about where else the map would be hidden, Then they looked at the map to see if they did something wrong and the only thing in the map was a riddle. They looked at the riddle and tried to solve it but it was one weird riddle. It said : "In the castle you may find a golden rooster, and inside of the bird it will say the word" and then Dr. Winglo said just to be funny, " hey maybe you have to break the duck" and Dr. Griffin paused for a split second and then he said "hey that's right" and everyone just stared at Dr. Griffin and he said "what if the rooster is a statue and you have to break the statue open and there's a note or something inside?". Everybody "oohed" and "aahed and thought that was a great idea but what was the castle and the whole word thing? That's what they had to find out. And so the next day they found a whole bunch of glowing goop in the corner of the cave and so they dressed up as bad aliens and went into town to try and figure out what the castle and the word meant. They bumped into some bad aliens and knew how to talk to them because Gasképall was up all night with Dr. Griffin, Dr. Leo and Dr. Winglo teaching them to talk their language. They asked the aliens if there was a castle in Bloobor and told them that they were all new in town and were just looking around. The aliens told them about the kings castle and where it was, so that's where they were headed to next.

They got to the castle and went to the kings throne, and they asked the king whether he had any golden roosters and he said " Fooshy" (which means yes)! And so the king showed them where to find the golden rooster and they went to go find it. Once they got there they looked for the rooster and found it and went back to the king. They had to buy the rooster off the king and so they did. They all went back to the cave and looked for the "word" but they didn't exactly know what that meant. So it was Dr. Winglo's idea to brake it open and see if the "word" was inside the bird, so they did and Dr. Winglo was right, there was a note inside of the statue that said "the treasure map might have fooled you but the real treasure is under the jail take the map just in case" they all thought about it for a second and Dr. Leo said "So is it saying that we have to Jail in order to get the treasure?" and then Gasképall got it and said "we don't have to go to Jail we just have to get in the jail cell". They all understood and then they all looked at

Dr. Winglo and he said "What is everybody staring at me for?".

The next day they sent Dr. Winglo into town (which remember..... is very dangerous...not to say against the law) and so Dr. Winglo set off into town on the long and dangerous journey. Once he got there he went straight to the jail with a big basket at hand and said "I'm here to give food to the people in jail". The police working there didn't suspect a thing because people came in for that sort of thing every week. When Dr. Winglo got inside a cell looking for the opening and handing out food at the same time and then he found it! Inside one of the cells there was a locked door and when Dr. Winglo asked what it was, the police working there just said "It was a basement that some alien locked long ago and when he died he took the key with him, no one knows what's inside".

When he went back to the cave Dr. Leo, Dr. Griffin and Gasképall were all tied up after Dr. Winglo untied them they told him "The bad aliens came and wanted to take the map but it was Dr. Griffin's idea that we hide the map and so we told them we didn't have it". Dr. Winglo had to think for a few seconds because he said it all so fast and then he told them his news. He said "I think I found the door to find the treasure" and Dr. Leo, Dr. Griffin and Gasképall shouted at the same time "WHAT???". When Dr. Winglo explained the rest of his story they all understood better. They all had to find the key to the door before they could go back to the jail cell. They were all talking about where the key could be when Dr. Winglo said "There was one brick in the cell that was a different color then the other ones, if that means anything?" and then Dr. Leo added with an evil grin "What if the alien that hid the treasure did like they do it in the movies?". Everyone looked confused and then Dr. Leo explained "That brick that was a different color could be a clue, a button or something". Everyone looked a little less confused then they did before, and then they all decided that they should check it out, but how? They all made a plan that night so they could get inside that cell, and without being caught.

Early the next morning Dr. Griffin, Dr. Leo and Dr. Winglo (Gasképall had to stay behind) noticed that Oscar has gone missing but they had no time to worry about that. Then they all went into town. They did wear their costumes as bad aliens but they still went early so that it wouldn't be as busy as it would be later, and went shopping for clothes in town and then wore them back to the jail. Before they entered the jail they all took off their costumes and then went into the jail. People aren't allowed in Bloobor so they would have to be arrested (and that's exactly what they wanted to happen). The first thing they did was go to the front office and the police officer that was on duty arrested them for coming on alien property. Once they got into the jail sell they made a deal with the bad aliens that were already in there, they told them that if they didn't tell anyone what they were doing they would give them some of the treasure. So they examined the different colored brick (remember all three of them are scentists) and then Dr. Griffin got it, it was just like Dr. Leo said.... it was a button, and when they went to push it they all were very nervous about what would happen. Dr. Winglo was in so much suspense he just got it over with and pushed the brick. "Am I in heaven, I must be because every thing is so shiny" said Dr. Winglo. The room he was in was very shiny and it was also very nice.Then he heard Dr. Griffin say "Everything's gold... pure gold" and then they all heard Dr. Leo say "I haven't cried since, since, I can't even remember". They were all playing with the gold until they heard something and it was something loud, they all looked around for a minute and then saw what the noise was "So nice to see you again, you are so very smart" said the bad alien of course he was speaking a different language "Just as I suspected, you were following us the whole time weren't you?" said Dr. Griffin and the bad alien answered the question "Why yes, yes I was". Just then the bad alien pulled out a freeze ray and tried to freeze the three scentists but right when he was about to press the trigger Gasképall and Oscar fell from nowhere and Gasképall stole the freeze ray while Oscar was beating up the bad alien and then Gasképall froze the bad alien for life. They all got their gold and went to the space shuttle that belonged to the scientists. Dr. Griffin, Dr. Leo and Dr. Winglo came back to earth with their share of the gold, the map and Oscar and they were featured in many newspapers because of their amazing journey to outer space and all the things &/or aliens they met.


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