An alien map

by Rachel Brown


Part 1: Map

This was not a normal map. This one looked like it was from Mars. It was a big robotic thing . It looked like it could walk. It had a big green button on the front and when I found it I just had to press the button and that's what made the map open up. Strange enough the map looked so normal to me. The paper was a blue-ish-green-ish color and the print was very different from anything I had ever seen. It was a print I did not recognize. It looked like someone or something wrote it because it had a big mark on it that looked like a moon crater. Whatever it was I think it stood for his or its signature. Scary, mostly because I do not really know what the map is for.


Part 2: Owner

As far as we have discovered the thing that has the map is a alien, and we have researched all the planets and the only marking of an alien was on the planet Mars. We found the markings all over the planet but we believe we have found its home... According to the research the creature lives in one of the largest craters in the world. The research also says that there are more than one alien in space but there are over 500 of them all over space. But the one that has the map is very unique because he is a blue alien and everyone else is green. We can tell that only from the slime that we found on the planet. And since the map is so modern, the one with the map could only be at least 13 or younger.If you think its wierd that he's blue then listen to this, not only is he blue but his whole family is blue... We are still trying to find out why but until we find more markings of the creature, the world will be safe... We hope!!!


Part 3: Setting

This takes place in 6666 (which is based in the future) Where this planet is located is very dangerous because it is right beside the black hole. And in order to get there it takes at least four years. The planet that the creature lives on is wet and sticky, but the special way that aliens are made it does not affect them at all. Now because they're intelligent creatures no one has ever seen them in person. But scientists have found their markings all over the planet Mars. The city that the aliens are living in we are now calling Noyla. And its hard to breathe up there because the weather is so HOT and humid. Because its so hot in Noyla they can't live above ground so they have to live underground. There is no plant life on their planet because of the weather, except for a type of moss that grows under ground that we suspect is edible. The markings they leave is like a slimy goop trail and the holes in the ground predict where they live.


Part 4: Other Character

The other character in my story is the bad alien. This one is trying to steal the map from the good guy. I'm now calling the good alien Experiment479 and the bad alien is called Experiment 480. The bad alien is green, and the main character Experiment479 is blue because he's special. And the one way to tell that Experiment480 is a bad guy is because when a alien is mean at heart it grows green hair, ALL OVER ITS BODY!!! So everyone knows he's a bad guy. And another thing we discovered is that Experiment479 is from a family of 11 people (counting his parents). And there is 5 girls and 4 boys and they have a quffle (which is like a dog in our galaxy).


Part 5: Dream: A Magic Map

His dream is about a magic map. This certain map can take you anywhere you want to go. In his dream it looks like the map is made out of stone, and it looks like it's a fake because its so magical. This map is very useful and helps Experiment479 in the future (and he knows that because he wants to catch Experiment479 because he has the map). He Remembers Experiment479 because of the donte(a type of clay) wars the used to have as kids, after toyne(school). On the map there is a button, and if you pressed it, the map would dissolve so that nobody catches you with the map. His dream is more like a nightmare than a dream. Because in it he finds the map and smashes it into a gazillion pieces. And the legend says every time you break a magic map it gets trapped in the past along with the recent owner of the map.


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